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As I was walking home from school one day, I saw a lady bug. It was one of those red one's. The more typical color you would see here. I continued walking leaving the lady bug on the sidewalk. When I arrived home I opened the door to the smell of a very well cooked dinner. I walked into the kitchen throwing my backpack into the living room. "How was your day?" I heard my mom say over the stove's crackling noise's. "it was good I guess.." I said with a mix of sadness in my voice. "AW, does baby need a tissue?" My big brother yelled exaggeratingly from the kitchen table. I persuaded myself to ignore him, I walked into the living room to get out my homework. I analyzed it and let out a big *sigh*. I had to paraphrase someone else's words into a paragraph.
(that's not short.. is it?) (Also I didn't use negotiate)
You can do it just read it on your own and if u want me to answer it just inform me :)
The two examples which correctly punctuate an essential expression or element in the sentence are:
Architecture, so popular with Native Americans, is still a flourishing art.
Mexico, where sports are popular, has hosted the Olympic Games at the World Cup.
Some constituents that alter a sentence are indispensable and restrict the meaning of an altered word or prhase, whereas others aren't indispensable and don't affect its meaning. The first ones are separated from the main idea using commas.
Mexico City is home to several museums that display the country’s past. Here we don't have any non essential element.
The National Historical Museum, which is in Chapultepec Castle, is concerned with Mexico’s history since the Spanish conquest. Here, information can't be ommited and in fact, shouldn't be set off with comas, since such expression contains essential information (it is not any National Historic Museum but the National Historic Museum which is in Chapultepec Castle).
