Question

Read the summary of the story Henrique wrote.The soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the canyon. They'd been traveling for days to reach the dragon's lair. Finally they arrived. Then the dragon approached, and it roared. Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise.Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the summary?

Answer 1

Answer:

The best answer to the question: Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the summary? would be: He needs to revise the summary and add a little more descriptive language to give it a bit more life.

Explanation:

When you read this particulat summary, you do not get much more from it than a bit of general information on how the events of the story developed and followed. However, it is merely flat, completely emotionless and does not stir a reader to want to know, or read, any further. Literally, Henrique hands over the facts of the story without adding a bit of language, known as figurative language, to leave the reader with the desire to learn more and read more. That is why the critique would be that he needs to add more figurative language to increase the interest of the reader in the story.