Read the paragraph. [1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory atte
nded rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh! Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
