Question

Read the paragraph. [1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh! Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?

Answer 1

Answer:

Begins with the subject

Explanation:

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Answer 2

 This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the same way. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs (absolutely; naturally) or some connective (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to avoid monotony.