Question

I talked with the major and learned that when it should start and our cars should be loaded we would drive them back along the screened road and up to the main road along the ridge where there would be a post and other cars to clear them.what effect does the style of this long sentence achieve?

Answer 1

The effect that this style of long sentence given above achieves is a run-on effect. A run-on sentence consists of two or more independent clauses that are punctuated correctly and does not use the proper conjunctions. As a result, the sentence becomes confusing. There is a particular rule that should be followed in creating a sentence. It should contain 20-30 words only and that 50 words or more should be avoided as possible.

Answer 2

The correct answer is:  

The uninterrupted action mirrors how the orders will be carried out when the time comes.

A Farewell to Arms is a novel by Ernest Hemingway, first published in 1929.  

It his a first-person description of an American, Frederic Henry, working as a lieutenant in the ambulance corps of the Italian Army during the Italian campaign of World War I.