If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
Make sure you have all essentials needed for it and that you are dedicated to perform whatever task or activity that you are looking forward to acheiving.
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She watches closely and runs besides her daughter
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The library is too important to the community for its budget to be cut.
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