The rate of incarceration of women in prison. this is an major because of how there’s an increase amount of women in prison
I think that B is in the active voice.
The awnser is D I believe
I also think C achieving would be the core answer
Everything looks good so far, label the last paragraph as conclusion.
Make sure to note where the thesis is restated.
"For instance, they can make squeaky noises...etc" is something you can highlight and label as an example/supporting detail. Same goes for your examples in your other body paragraphs.
If its your essay just double check that it transitions smoothly, and you're good to go!
Hope this helps :)
