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ok U WANT TO LOSE UR FAT SO DO CYCLING , DANCING , CONTROL UR DIET , HANG UR BODY ETC
I think it is probably A. De-test
You're still talking about freitag's triangle there. So, in a sense, you have a traditional story structure. But sure, that will definitely work and would make readers keep on going. When you say small build up them mini climax then another build up, you're describing traditional story structure. Your just calling your overcoming of obstacles "climaxes" or "mini climaxes" which is what they are in reality.
It is exclamation point because it is an abrupt remark or like a suprise