I'd say that this sentence has a dangling or misplaced modifier. The modifier <em>when in highschool </em>cannot be used that way, because we don't know for sure whether that refers to the guidance counselor or you. The correct way to write this sentence would be: When I was in high school, ...
Ok write a paragraph on why u should take a form of travel (your choice) BUT MAKE IT A ADVERTISEMENT and underline your derby and label each one action or linking...