<h3>I hope it's helpful for you</h3>
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
Answer:
The ending of the story changes as follows:
<em> Before he could get into the car, a loud thud reverberates off his head. One of the people in the crowd had successfully aimed a block of wood, 3 inch on both sides, to the back of his head. There was no use turning to check who the culprit was. The pain was begining to set in. Smitty half entered and half jumped into the car as the Sheriff on cue depressed the accelerator almost sending Smitty out the car again. As the car broke inertia, it threw Smitty with a strong jolt into the car. He almost hit his head on the dashboard but braced himself with his right hand.</em>
<em>The door oscillated rapidly and widly about three times before Smitty caught it and slammed it shut.</em>
<em>The car roared away raising a lot of dust as it sped off with the crowd pursuing behind them.</em>
Things turn into geographical features of the Earth, such as the Himalayas, when the Eldest Magician blows on them. The author refers to the animals as "All-the-Elephant-there-was," "All-the-Beaver-there-was," and "All-the-Turtle-there-was."
The question asks for details that support the conclusion that this story is about the creation of the world. In creation stories, the narrator is telling about how something is created. The first correct choice explains how the mountains were created. The second correct choice shows that there was only one animal per species of elephant, beaver, and turtle. All of the other options do not help to prove that this is a creation story.
Answer:
x = 45
y = 61
Ender is bullied bc he is a third and he has a monitor
