Answer:
See explanation below
Explanation:
Dear Idith,
How are you? I hope that you are fine. As you <u>know</u> my family and I
are at Krabi, Thailand. Krabi <u>is</u> a small town.
Every morning, my family and I <u>wake</u> up early to see the sunrise and we
<u>jog </u>along the sea. Then, we <u>eat</u> breakfast at a cafe. My father usually
<u>orders</u> the local coffee. The coffee here <u>is</u> aromatic and tasty.
People in Krabi <u>are</u> very friendly. They always <u>smile</u> at us. Many
tourists love to come to Krabi. They <u>like</u> to buy clothes and souvenirs.
Hope you are having a good time too. We will be back home next Monday.
Till we meet again. Bye.
Love,
HW
Lee Ann
DA O R N O R K
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<span>The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal style and objective tone.
The sentences in the passage do not have errors in grammar or punctuation, so any of these options can be immediately removed. Ending the first sentence with the word "cool" and using "that's for sure" and "you" in the last sentence, give the passage a much more informal tone. These sentences should be revised for a more formal tone to have a stronger concluding paragraph.
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Answer:
the audience might get a better sense of how much the narrator seems to miss being raised by his mother
Explanation:
