Without having the passage, I can only help you to find it on your own. While you read the entire passage, what detail are you reading that supports that national parks are in need of coordinated administration from professionals of the preserves? You have only stated 'detail', so I am assuming they are only asking for one; therefore, you need to look for some type of factual statement to support the sentence.
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The details provided about this experience are vague and ineffective.
</span><span>The word choice is equally vague and limited.
</span><span>Overall, this essay represents a limited writing performance.
q3
</span><span>The word choice is more general than specific, and sentence fragments create minor disruptions in the fluency of the writing.
Sentences are varied, purposeful, and well controlled, enhancing the effectiveness of the essay.
All ideas are strongly related to the thesis and are focused on the topic specified in the prompt.
The presentation of the two scenarios is too brief to be considered more than superficial.
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Answer:
Every day when I was a kid I’d drop anything I was doing, no matter what it was—stealing wire, having a fistfight, siphoning gas—no matter what, and tear like a blue streak through the alleys, over fences, under porches, through secret shortcuts, to get home not a second too late for the magic time. My breath rattling in wheezy gasps, sweating profusely from my long cross-country run I’d sit glassy-eyed and expectant before our Crosley Notre Dame Cathedral model radio.
Explanation:
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"<span>c. With all of the death and destruction from the war, Americans wanted to escape into an ideal world" is the best option, since America was devastated from the massive amounts of violence and wanted a "release".</span>
Because they don't want to read or write about something that may not even be true, or it could just be an opinion.
