Lines 1-23: Which details describe what Odysseus experiences as he waits by the pit? What mood is evoked by these details? He was scared.
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My plan to improve my grade is to focus more and be more productive. How?
I'm going to set a scheldue which I need to follow in order to finish my tasks and school work. I will also be more engaged in class by asking questions and sharing my ideas. I will continue my good work to be more succesful, In the future I will be who I wanted to be.
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I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
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I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
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Langston Hughes, a poet who writes his poem expressing life, two poems he wrote “Dream `Deferred” and “Dreams” are similar and different in a way. “A Dream Deferred” where talks about what happen to dreams when they are put on hold. “Dreams” explores the idea that without dreams, life is without meaning.
