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One of the problems is that the sentences are too simple, there is no complexity in them. Changing up the sentence type would help it flow better. Also, he starts every sentence with 'Sue' or 'she', which needs to be varied in order to make the piece more interesting than it currently is.
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In the debate over the Wilmot Proviso, Senator John C. Calhoun could contend that Congress did not have the authority to ban slavery in the territories because according to the Constitution of the United States, Congress could not deprive any state of equal rights in the territories.
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