He is confused because nobody knew she was
"dead" yet
If its true or false its true
Answer: emphasize that statewide changes depend on individual choices
Explanation: Writers frequently use subordination to signal an imbalance or inequality between ideas. In the sentence toward the middle of the final paragraph, the author uses the subordinate clause “if Wyoming is going to be a more diverse place” to identify a situation that could exist in the future. She then uses an independent clause to reveal the condition that must be met for this situation to exist—“people have to choose to live” there. By organizing the sentence this way, the author places an emphasis on what individuals must do in order to change the state of Wyoming as a whole.
Answer:
I identified six....
* adding the comma in the number
* the capitalized E in Egyptians
* 'a lot' is 2 words, not one (though, 'a lot like' should be written as 'similar to')
* 'ares' is spelled 'ours'
* a question mark has been added
* the word 'over' should be written as 'more than'
Explanation:
Would you believe that more than 7,000 years ago ancient Egyptians liked to bowl on alleys a lot like (similar to) ours?
