Question

Read the sentence from an informative essay about globalization in China. Pollution levels in Beijing are improving in some ways thanks to government programs. What would most improve the sentence?

Answer 1

The best way to improve this sentence to make it more informative but not too long to bore people, would be listing at least three programs the government is carrying out to improve pollution levels, so it'd give the reader a better idea of what this sentence means. Another option would be using "being reduced" or "have been reduced" instead of "improving" ,the pollution levels, as there may be people who don't know enough about this topic and may misunderstand the message.

Answer 2

Adding facts and evidence