Alliteration at: "skirt starts its spin"
"lace lullabies"
"sand stinging"
not sure about the effect.
The answer would be a mailbox
hope this helped
Know you audience and tailor your writing to them. This will help them relate or "see" what you're writing.
If you are telling a story to young children, use simple words and be descriptive and enthusiastic.
If you are writing to impress a college admitter, use complex words and formal diction.
If you are writing for a religious audience, maybe write a sermon0type passage and include religion in your writing.