Read the sentence. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information.
Which is the best revision of the sentence? a.Tension will erupt in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. b.Tension erupted in the room when it reveals that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. c.Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain will know that the spy withholding information. d.Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withheld information.
he best revision of the sentence is Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withheld information.
Explanation:
The original sentence has the same error as 3 of the options which is the use of a gerund without the verb be. Therefore the correct option is the only one that uses a verb in past in the second sentence which is cohesive with the first one being both in past tense.
d. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villian knew that the spy withheld information.
Explanation: The best revision of the sentence is answer d because is grammatically correct, the sentence is in past tense and that is why all the verbs should be in past tense. The word withholding is not in past tense, but the word withheld it is, that's why this answer is grammatically correct.
Tsarina Alexandra is the spouse of Tsar Nicholas II , which was appointed as the temporary ruler when he took command of the battlefield. She was murdered along with her immediate family after refusing to conform to the will of the high Aristocrats within the kingdom.
