The following sentence may have an error in effective writing. The sentence or part of the sentence is underlined. Choose the be
st revision of the underlined part. If no revision is necessary, choose the first answer.. . Some of the musicians left their music scores at your desk. A. left their music scores at your desk.. . B. left there music scores at your desk.. . C. left his or her music scores at you're desk.. . D. left they're music scores at your desk..
No revision is necessary for this sentence, so the correct answer would be A. left their music scores at your desk. There refers to space (look over there!), and they're is short for they are. His or her is redundant.
The main reason why Bob Dylan uses the word "Lonesome" in the song <em>The lonesome death of Hattie Carroll</em> is because there was no justice for her muder. She was killed by a rich young man who was taken by the police, but <em>in a matter of minutes, on bail (he) was out walking. </em>
