Answer:
G - 69/268,
Florida,
14th September 2020,
The PTA Chairman,
ABC International School,
Florida,
Sub: Regarding ways to ensure the health needs of the students
Dear sir,
With great disappointment, I would like to draw your kind attention towards the carelessness of your school towards the health needs of the students. The quality of food that has been provided to the hostel students is extremely poor and unhygienic making them ill. A healthy diet is very crucial for the physical and mental growth and development of students. Thus, it is an immediate need and suggestion to have a constant check and supervision of the quality of food that is being served to the students.
The unavailability of proper medical facilities in the sickbay to the students is another serious concern. This is leading even the common cold and other illnesses to go severe which is preventing the students from studies for a longer time than required. It may further go serious and therefore, I request you to ensure appropriate provision of health infrastructure for the care of students' health and fitness.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
Sophie Godefroid.
Maybe when the writer uses italics in their righting, or if a character is saying something, they show the tone. If context could help, pay attention to that :)
I'm guessing your asking for a grammar check? If so then...
After the children left the school bus, they dropped their bags on the front proches of their houses. The children yelled "Hello!" to their mothers and fathers and ran towards the playground to play tag with each other.
