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ale4655 [162]
3 years ago
14

If someone could read the first part of my essay and give feedback that would be great

English
2 answers:
Ganezh [65]3 years ago
8 0
I would try not to use the word culture so much. Try to use the words civilization, society, and lifestyle. I hope this help!
ehidna [41]3 years ago
7 0

Pretty good! I don’t see any mistakes

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