For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
A metaphor does not contain like or as like a simile do.
<span>It is important for people to develop empathy skills at a young age so they can better understand the feelings of others.
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B.The satirist is suggesting a ridiculous solution to make his point, while the narrator is suggesting a practical solution to the problem.
Answer:
Explanation:
What type of person are they?
What is the person's POV?How old are they?
how old are they?