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BabaBlast [244]
3 years ago
10

Can Someone please check my essay, The words in red are the mistakes that the professor thinks I’ve made, i don’t see it tbh I m

ean I had 2 spelling mistakes which were in the first paragraph “your down instead of you’re down” and “on the other hands instead of on the other hand” but that’s it
I’m literally questioning my English skills at this point so please just tell me if u think he’s right or is he pointing out mistakes that don’t even exist
(Keep in my it’s just a general English skills course nothing serious)

English
1 answer:
vichka [17]3 years ago
7 0

For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".

When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.

Example: "a type of device"

Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.

Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"

The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".

The red commas definitely do not need to be there.

Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.

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