Real facts
don't make it so boring
good transitions
a good hook and conclusion
include a thesis statement
Answer:
you forgot to add the image/options!
The wind caresses each leaf as she blows by
Wisping through each blade of grass and grain
Helping every beautiful baby bird take flight
Though Her beauty could not compare
An underlying rage was unforeseen
thrashing trees and bees
leaving families astray
To wonder,
wait.
