Only if needed a independent clause is a complete sentence
Personification:
“The eye of heaven shines”
“Nor shall death brag”
Meaning:
“thy eternal summer shall not fade”
I would say using a comma to combine the two sentences.
In order to have a sentence with an active voice, you need to have to have the main subject perform an action.
"The revision (subject) gives the sentence (action) an active voice."
Answer: number 2
i hope this helps you:)
