Answer:
option B. The best critique to explain why Henrique should revise the paragraph is that he needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. In literature a commonly used device is the one of descriptive language. Basically, descriptive language is used to create a picture of the scene/character in the reader's mind. Henrique's story is laying the order of events in a logical order but it is lacking the descriptive language that will give details to those events, making the reader to engage with the story line.
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Explanation:
I think the first answer to the first answer is C. I clipped the review 'Local Restruants for Foodies' out of the paper for you.
I think the next answer might be A. I'm only halfway through the chapter ''The Lawerance Boy.''
I think the last answer is B. The main character in ''Treasure Island'' sailed on the ship the Hispaniola.
