HOW CAN I MAKE MY WRITING BETTER???? As I closed my eyes 10 years ago wondering what my current life would be like, I ever would
have imagined this. The perfect husband and blessed with twins on the way. My life could not get any better than this. As I close my eyes yet again, my mid transports me to the near future of next month. The babyshower and the decoration of Peyton and Valerie's rooms. Half red, half turquoise - our favorite colors. My best friend right alongside us, as she has been since day one. What have I done in life to be honored with such occurences, I wonder. Whatever I did, I must have done it right!
When you read this, you can literally see and picture the images in the sample write. This honestly brought a smile to my face, just to see how happy the character is in the story.
Only two words can describe this write: Perfectly Amazing.
HAs I closed my eyes 10 years ago wondering what my current life would be like, . The perfect husband and blessed with twins on the way. My life could not get any better than this. As I close my eyes yet again, my transports me to the near future of next month. The baby shower and the decoration of Peyton and Valerie's rooms. Half red, half turquoise - our favorite colors. My best friend right alongside us, as she has been since day one. What have I done in life to be honored with such occurences, I wonder. Whatever I did, I must have done it right!
Hope this helps! Everything sounded good, it was mainly just minor grammar and spelling mistakes.
In most of the schools cell phones are not allowed and also most of the people think that cell phone has alot of disadvantages and in schools cell phones are the cause of disturbance.
I don't think they need to be written, maybe it would be more formal if it were important but it wouldn't really make a difference if it were written or not. Also this generation can text or call 24/7 and it's usually common to invite someone by texting or calling.
