HOW CAN I MAKE MY WRITING BETTER???? As I closed my eyes 10 years ago wondering what my current life would be like, I ever would
have imagined this. The perfect husband and blessed with twins on the way. My life could not get any better than this. As I close my eyes yet again, my mid transports me to the near future of next month. The babyshower and the decoration of Peyton and Valerie's rooms. Half red, half turquoise - our favorite colors. My best friend right alongside us, as she has been since day one. What have I done in life to be honored with such occurences, I wonder. Whatever I did, I must have done it right!
When you read this, you can literally see and picture the images in the sample write. This honestly brought a smile to my face, just to see how happy the character is in the story.
Only two words can describe this write: Perfectly Amazing.
HAs I closed my eyes 10 years ago wondering what my current life would be like, . The perfect husband and blessed with twins on the way. My life could not get any better than this. As I close my eyes yet again, my transports me to the near future of next month. The baby shower and the decoration of Peyton and Valerie's rooms. Half red, half turquoise - our favorite colors. My best friend right alongside us, as she has been since day one. What have I done in life to be honored with such occurences, I wonder. Whatever I did, I must have done it right!
Hope this helps! Everything sounded good, it was mainly just minor grammar and spelling mistakes.
Argumentative essays are those essays which provide a perfect solution to convince someone about an idea or opinion that is why their style of writing should be formal. The tone, the choice of words and the way those words are put together must be less personal and precise. For instance we want to provide information about an incident, we should use its exact date and time which means we should be precise.
