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miv72 [106K]
3 years ago
6

50POINTS NO TROLLS I NEED TO MAKE THE PARAGRAPH BELOW MORE FLUENT AND WORK ON MY SENTENCE FLUENCY CAN ANYBODY HELP PLEASE?

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2 answers:
LuckyWell [14K]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

You see, if one person smokes everyone around them smokes. It doesn't matter if your not holding the cigarette it is basically like your smoking too. If you have a multi person family and one person smokes it effects the others in the family just as much as the smoker. Smoking puts so many people at risk. Both children and adults are at risk for a long list of chronic and fatal diseases. Even if you dont believe in second hand smoking you know it can still cause cancer to you. I want you to take a minuet and ask yourself would you give someone you care about deeply cancer?

Explanation:

I hope this help

have a good day

<3 C.J

Bezzdna [24]3 years ago
5 0

You see if one-person smokes, everyone in your surroundings will smoke, regardless of whether they are the one holding the cigarette or even in the same building. In a multifamily building, the families with nonsmokers are affected just as much as the ones that have smokers in them. Smoking puts those people at so many risks. Children and adults are at risk for a list of chronic and fatal diseases. So if you don't think secondhand smoke will give your loved ones the "unheard of' diseases," you now know that it can cause cancer. Would you really put your loved one's at risk for getting cancer or even death just for a second of euphoria?

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