My aunt made me a big doll out of towels. It was the most comical shapeless thing, this improvised doll, with no nose, mouth, ea
rs or eyes—nothing that even the imagination of a child could convert into a face. Curiously enough, the absence of eyes struck me more than all the other defects put together. I pointed this out to everybody with provoking persistency, but no one seemed equal to the task of providing the doll with eyes. A bright idea, however, shot into my mind, and the problem was solved. I tumbled off the seat and searched under it until I found my aunt's cape, which was trimmed with large beads. I pulled two beads off and indicated to her that I wanted her to sew them on my doll. She raised my hand to her eyes in a questioning way, and I nodded energetically. The beads were sewed in the right place and I could not contain myself for joy; but immediately I lost all interest in the doll. Which line from the excerpt is an important detail that would be included in a summary of the excerpt? It was the most comical shapeless thing I tumbled off the seat and searched under it until I found my aunt's cape the absence of eyes struck me more than all the other defects but immediately I lost all interest in the doll
Whenever you give a fact it looks better and more smart to show where you got the fact so it can be in the first paragraph last paragraph etc anywhere you give facts you should cite your sources so the information is more trusted and looks better . Hope this helps ! (:
Keep in mind that all these are direct translations. So it might be slightly sloppy since it was directly translated and not fit for Japanese slang and shortenings. So please correct me if this is slightly off :)
