Question

Correct the sentence below:According to findings derived from functional magnetic resonance imaging (MRI), the area of the brain in which a second or third language is stored depends on the age of the language learner; whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, language areas overlap in a young child.
(A) whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner,

(B) whereas for adults each language occupies a distinct area of the brain and

(C) each language occupies a distinct area of the brain when they are learned by an adult, while

(D) each language in adults occupied a distinct area of the brain, while

(E) each language occupying a distinct area of the brain for an adult learner, and

Answer 1

Answer:

The answer is: D.each language in adults occupied a distinct area of the brain, while

Explanation:

This is more correct because readability is improved. Whereas was not needed for the sentence to make sense. It just makes it verbose and harder to understand.

Also, since two things are compared i.e language learning in adults and in children, while is a more correct term to use in showing comparison.