Let's number them okay. Since I can't see everything that is said in the picture I will have to assume it is either number 3 or 4.
If you accept either C or D as the correct revision then you have to accept both of them. Hence the best way to treat the sentence is to ignore both of them.
B is not correct either. You can over punctuate.
That leaves A.
Sometimes the right answer to many things is to do nothing. My dad used to say "Don't fix what isn't broke."
A is the answer <<<<<
<span>The description of Old Scratch infers he's a demon.... particularly the "great red eyes". The fact that he is "begrimed with soot" alludes to the fires of Hell. Would he frighten me? Defintely.</span>
The best answer to complete this sentence would be the third option aka C) Theme of equal rights.
Easy, should be C, B, D, E, A, hope I got that right for you :)
