Yes
It uses a lot of commas where you can easily put periods, and it uncomfortably merges multiple sentences into one
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Yes, maybe compare capitals or large cities. You still want to have enough information findable, but Australia and England are both very large, and I consider it too broad.
Ok......and????/ what's the question?
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b. The text highlights exciting events to keep the reader’s attention.
c. The text indicates that the story is moving toward a key event in the text.
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