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i think you could re write it however you like but keep the storyline that " SOMEONE goes out in the woods to go to there RELATIVE/SOMEONE and they dont know they are bieng spy'd on by SOMEONE/ANIMAL. when they get to there RELATIVE/SOMEONE house the ANIMAL/SOMEONE is secretly pretending to be the RELATIVE/PERSON and so on
Answer:
They both seem very detailed and dark.
Explanation:
The excerpts from the storie both seem very dark.
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