Question

Rewrite this sentence using a metaphor : Scott was sad for a long time after his puppy dies.

Answer 1

Scott was a heap of flowing, heartbroken tears for a long time after his beloved puppy passed away.

Note: Be careful with your tense. At the beginning, you said 'was sad' (past tense), and at the end, you put 'puppy dies' (present tense).

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