Question

The paragraph below does not have correct punctuation. In the space below, rewrite the paragraph with the proper dialogue format.
The party was almost ruined by the rain last Saturday. When the rain approached, we all grabbed what we could. We better hurry Mandy said or we'll get soaked. Joe picked up the cake and I said I've got the cake . You should get the sandwiches, yelled Theodore as he picked up the potato salad. We all made it under the gazebo as the first rain drops fell.

Answer 1

I'm not an expert, but I believe the answer is... By the way, feel free to correct any changes on what I answered.

The party was almost ruined by the rain last Saturday. When the rain approached, we all grabbed what we could.

"We better hurry," Mandy said, "or we'll get soaked.".

Joe picked up the cake and I said, "I've got the cake.".

"You should get the sandwhiches," yelled Theodore as he picked up the potato salad. We all made it under the gazebo as the first rain drops fell.