Explanation:
The most complicated period of life for me was the transition from adolescence to adulthood. It is difficult to start living life with the seriousness required when there is still no emotional preparation for it.
When I turned twenty, I realized that I would have to take on greater responsibilities than just going to school and meeting with my friends. The pressure to choose a college and an ideal profession were points that substantially impacted my emotions, and caused me anxiety and difficulty in dealing with the challenges that I would have to face.
I can say that it was not an easy period, it is difficult for you to decide something that will have a direct bearing on your future, there is often no possibility of a dialogue with young people to help with their doubts and insecurities, it is only a request that the young person decide about your life, without often having a concrete emotional intelligence to do so.
I always wanted to study fashion, it was something that since my childhood I showed interest, I made drawings of clothes in the notebook and imagined what my collections of haute couture dresses would be like. But unfortunately life takes us to different paths of the vocation that we believe we have, often based on the lack of opportunities to pay for a college and live alone in another city.
Finally, I chose to go to administration school and it was a good choice within what I could do, since management gave me the tools necessary to build a successful business that could help me build a fashion-oriented company in the future. .
Answer:
why not
Explanation:
if dante love Shay's and when Shay's love dante they can. why not
Answer:
If you want the honest feedback, I got you. I was really good, but I have a few suggestions to make it sound more "official":
- Italicize sounds (i.e. change "Thud!" to <em>Thud. </em>in the second paragraph)
- Make sure formatting is reasonable and consistent: "1 month later" is too big, the title should be bigger and "Beanbag" is incorrect (it's bean bag)
- Suspense would work very well in this story. I wouldn't reveal who the speaker is until the last paragraph or even last sentence. To do this, you can touch more on the emotional aspects of this story in the introduction and body paragraphs (no naming names, places, things, etc.) Make it abstract as you can to build up to the answers: Who is talking? What happened to them? Why do they feel this way? Things like that.
- Stop being so repetitive with words like "demon" (maybe substitute for "little devil" or "menace")
- I see the humorous aspect of this story, but I would make sure to not include too many spelling and grammar mistakes.
Sorry if my suggestions are a little too intense, but I can tell you are a good writer and can easily improve in these areas! Please let me know if this helps!
Answer:
The hairbrush.
Explanation:
He was checking on Starr but the police officer shot him because he thought he was trying to get a gun.
