Cryptic: Puzzling, Obscure
Balmy: Temperate, Soothing
Quarry: Prey, Target
Retribution: Punishment, Revenge
Coveted: Desirable, Longed For
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Using strategies to comprehend a text.
Answer:
The author uses the long-line structure.
Explanation:
Free verse poem is a poem which has no particular rhyme or rhythm. The author Allen Ginsberg’s in the poem "A Supermarket in California" uses long line structure. He uses free verse poem. The long-line structure imitates stream-of-conscious thought.
Stream of conscious means when one image leads to other. In the poem he uses this in a poetic style. The poem is about a guy who walks on the street, goes to supermarket and looks at people. While doing this he also calls upon a guy, Walt Whitman, who is also an outcast like the poet.
Answer:
Basically I won't be giving the whole 100 words, but the theme is the process of becoming.
