Wooww...your poem is amazing...
The only idea I can suggest is to use more sophisticated vocabulary to express your thoughts and feelings and maybe a range of punctuation.
An argument uses logic to show why your stand on an issue is the best choice. An argument needs evidence and conclusion that convinces the reader or listener and validates the argument's premises.
It is necessary to collect pieces of evidence and logic behind the evidence to convince. it should claim your stand on an issue. Arguments should ignore the hasty generalizations such as pink color is associated with girls and blue to boys.
<span>Jane notes the contrast between the nature of the act and the meaning that it held for her
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it might change the plot of the story by the character is at one place and he/she lost or forgot something so they have to go back an get it or find it.
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