Your correct on everything
While Lady Crawford was in the hospital, she emailed Ms. White.
Lady Crawford, while in the hospital, emailed Ms. White.
While overseas on deployment, Tidus reported to his supervisor.
Tidus reported to his supervisor when overseas on deployment.
While Mariah was on vacation, Sarah offered to clean her apartment.
Sarah, while Mariah was on vacation, offered to clean her apartment.
Since Beth had lost her watch, she and Melissa were both late.
Melissa and Beth were both late, since Beth had lost her watch.
Were you suppost to add an image??
Include evidence to support your claim.
