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<u>need</u><u> </u><u>to</u><u> </u><u>make</u><u> </u><u>sure</u><u> </u><u>he</u><u> </u><u>correct</u><u> </u><u>all</u><u> </u><u>errors</u><u> </u><u>and</u><u> </u><u>make</u><u> sure</u><u> he</u><u> has</u><u> the</u><u> </u><u>right</u><u> </u><u>information</u><u>.</u>
The female character that was referred in the lines is Miss Lantry who have a high position in society. She is unattainable to Richard because of her richness. She is also a leading participant in social activities. He can hardly find time to talk to her.
FIGURES OF SPEECH
» Allusion: A reference to something else, such as a work of literature, specifically Declaration of Independence.
» Metaphor: A comparison of two different things that show how they're the same; they do NOT use the words 'like' or 'as'.
» Personification: A type of metaphor in which nonliving and nonhuman things are given human characteristics/abilities.
» Simile: A comparison of two different things that use the words 'like' or 'as' to show how they're similar.
» Hyperbole: Figure of speech that uses exaggeration for emphasis.
» Irony: A figure of speech in which words convey the opposite of their literal meaning of a situation contrary to what one would expect.
» Paradox: A statement that appears to contradict itself but can be true.
ABSOLUTE PHRASE
» An absolute phrase is a descriptive phrase that modifies an entire clause.
<h2>noun + participle + other modifiers</h2>