I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
UDHR Universal Declaration of Human Rights
B. Noting which details provide essential support to an author’s main idea is an important study skill.
A.I stay up all night studying the words for the spelling bee. And you can see me any time of day practicing running. I never walk if I can trot, and shame on Raymond if he can’t keep up.B.But as they get to me, they slow down. I’m ready to fight, ‘cause like I said I don’t feature a whole lot of chit-chat, I much prefer to just knock you down right from the jump.C.I dig my sneaker into the grass and stare at Gretchen who’s staring back, we both wondering just who did win.<span>D.With a little more study I can beat Cynthia and her phony self at the spelling bee. And if I bugged my mother, I could get piano lessons and become a star.</span>
