Which sentence shows the correct way to punctuate dialogue in a short story? ‘I saw a spaceship flying over the top of that hill
’ Tom said. “I saw a spaceship flying over the top of that hill,” Tom said. “I saw a spaceship flying over the top of that hill” Tom said. I saw a spaceship flying over the top of that hill, Tom said.
This answer is showing you just the way her eyelids wavered making you a mental picture of just the way they did, and how they "let in streamers of blue grey light like tissue paper over her eyes"
