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pashok25 [27]
3 years ago
11

Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the following sentence?

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2 answers:
Sedbober [7]3 years ago
6 0
Using pronouns to replace extra words.
Murljashka [212]3 years ago
3 0

but their is no way to be the answer nun of them have the right way. Should it be C. change "was in total agreement" to "agreed".

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