You need to read the story and mark the gramatical mistakes in it. Some are mispelled words, words that need to be captialized, and sometimes a spot in the sentence that needs a comma but one isnt there, or there is a comma where its not supposed to be.
For example: "So" I said, "when does te enchantment start"
You need to add a comma after 'so' and a question mark after 'start'.
It should look like this: "So<em><u>,</u></em>" I said, "when does the enchantment start<u>?</u>"
The one step that you can take when using the strategy of looping is that A. you freewrite about the subjects you have chosen.
