ADVISE : First off, never start your thesis statement off like " i'm going to tell you" or " In this." you want to grab the reader, and make the reader want to read more. You could start your thesis with a quote from O'Conner or a random quote about your subject. This tends to grab the reader, if they like the quote. You may also start your your thesis with a question that you may think people will have about the short story, or you had while reading the short story, you MUST answer this question in your writing though. Secondly, try not to make your thesis so long, this may lead the reader to bordome, but also dot make your thesis to short
The phrase “halo of pink and purple” is a metaphor for ! the sunset !
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Answer:
A). The words you choose to use should be largely influenced by the advice and counsel of others, such as your instructor, tutors and writing commons staff, and even friends and parents.
Explanation:
As per the question, the approach that is not advised to add authenticity and creativity to your writing would be 'the impact of peers and seniors' advice on the choice of words you will use in your writing' as it will indirectly remove the originality from your content and might fail to create the desired effect on the readers as well.
While writing a specific work, you can employ several approaches to add creativity and authenticity by gaining the perceptions and stand on a specific topic, choosing the reliable support material to substantiate your points, in elaborating the disputable ideas uncommonly.
But the choice of words do not reflect the creativity or authenticity of the work and neither it depends on what your peers advise you but on the purpose you wish to serve, the ideas, images, or vivid descriptions you aim to reflect, the mood and tone that the content requires in order to evoke the intended effect.