<span>If I like it:
Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:
I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better:
I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.</span>
It means progress through a persons determination. A determined person will advance and progress. Determination means never giving up and keep on trying.
It's C!
In most cases you can't put AND after a period but in this case u can.
