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Novay_Z [31]
3 years ago
10

Can someone proofread this because I want a good grade for ela

English
1 answer:
castortr0y [4]3 years ago
3 0
You need MANY MANY more commas. Stop using “you” as well. Don’t use “you” “me” “I” etc. Fix your grammar first and foremost, you’re missing a comma in almost every sentence.
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