I need you to raise my allowance, mom, so that I may buy things.
The answer I found with my brain is A good luck
Answer:
After changing the pronoun focus, the sentences can be:
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps one lose weight and improve one's cardiovascular systems while one enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
(Alternative answer - see the explanation below)
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps people lose weight and improve their cardiovascular systems while they enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
Explanation:
When writing formally, we must avoid permeating our texts with sentences that are too personal. Formal writing demands impersonality, which makes it sound more trustworthy and unbiased. Therefore, using the first person "I" should be avoided. One way to substitute it is by using the pronoun "one", as we did in the first answer above. Some people find it difficult to use "one". If that is the case, we can always use "you" or "people". These do not sound as formal as "you", but are still less personal and informal than "I".
Point of view is the mode of narration that the author employs to let the readers "hear" or "see" what happens in the story. There are three major types of point of view, first person, second person, and third person. First person uses the pronouns "I" or "we". Second person uses the pronoun "you". Lastly, the third person utilizes the pronouns "he", "she", "it", "they", or a name. In this case, the passage reads:
"She's a good dog, isn't she?" Doris said, hoping one of them would agree with her.
In this passage, the pronouns she and them indicate third-person point of view (C).
