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Malcolm was an avid photographer. He and his family likes to take pictures of nature, also taking portraits. When he was in California, Malcolm liked to visit lake Tahoe and take pictures of the wildlife. Sometimes the animals were moving to fast and they were blurry but the pictures of the lake were always perfect. Including pictures of sunsets over lakes with mountains in the background.
This isn't perfect but it is better than the original, if you would like you can edit it.
"Only dramatic literature has stage directions", seems like the best answer.
<span>assonance....................</span>
B) Excuses must be provided within seven days of the absence.
It depends. If the female is the best. I would use the second. If the female was, I would use the first