Brian is prepared because now if he goes out in the woods or if he is doing something, he always has the right supplies or weapons with him. also, he is prepared because he knows when to stay calm when there is a dangerous animal around. Old Brian was weak because he didn't do much because all he did was wait for someone to rescue him and he didn't have enough energy cause he had starved.
The first part, the audience knows of the bird but the other characters dont
Rewrite each sentence, incorporating the words in parentheses so that they form an appositive phrase. use a comma or commas to set off the appositive phrase. example unable to shut off the telescreen, he tried his best to ignore it.(constant presence)