This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
A poem or a haiku would most likely be the types of writing that uses stanza
A comma indicates a pause between the ending of an introductory word, phrase, or clause, and the beginning of the main part of the sentence.
# A comma is used before any coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet) that links two independent clauses. ....
#It is also used after a dependent clause that starts a sentence. ...
#Commas also used to offset appositives from the rest of the sentence. ...
#They are used to separate items in a series. (this is the most commonly used)